Five facts about what the Normans Brought to Britain
Why is this article featured? It’s riddled with grammatical and structural errors, which makes it easy to misconstrue the content and mislead readers. The research seems slapdash, the support nonexistent, and the explanations underdeveloped.
1."When William arrived he brought all the surnames over with him like Davidson." This makes Davidson sound like a person William the Conqueror is trying to emulate. It should read: "When William arrived, he brought surnames such as "Davidson" over with him." The other problem is that, according to this sentence, William himself implemented surnames in England, which he didn’t. William's invasion was in the 11th Century, and the Norman aristocracy in Britain didn't adopt surnames until the 13th Century, and the lower classes didn't completely do it until the reign of Henry VIII in the 16th Century. Therefore it's misleading to say that William brought over surnames. It’s true, his invasion yielded that eventual result, but it was not something done by the man himself. If the author had said "the Normans introduced surnames", the discrepancy could be amended.
2. “The buildings we know as castles were invented by the Normans as the idea was brought with them.” Why is the word “invented” used here? Shouldn’t the word “introduced” be used instead? Better yet, why not reorganize the sentence: “The Normans brought castles from mainland Europe…” and continue on?
“Before they were here, we had fortified towns and houses” Who is “we” here? Is the author assuming his or her audience to be British, or assuming that we know he or she is British? Why not combine the information with the previous sentence. “England had fortified towns and houses before the Normans brought castles from mainland Europe.” Then continue with the bit about the Battle of Hastings. Further, it should be noted that Normans brought Motte and Bailey castles (the same type) to England before William the Conqueror (in fact, by King Edward the Confessor’s vassals), since the previous section deals with a later point in history.
“…they built towers on top of mounds surrounded by another walled enclosure (called bailey towers) and other bigger versions, more like palaces we know today.” This is difficult to picture. From this sentence, a reader wouldn’t know whether the walled enclosure is around the mound or the tower. Furthermore, the author seems to be defining the WALL as the bailey tower rather than the tower itself. This is likely an error of sentence structure, but it creates confusion nonetheless. The wall is called a “curtain wall”, and the “bailey” is the courtyard inside that wall, and any tower inside that bailey may be called a bailey tower, but would more properly be referred to as a “keep”.
It should also be noted that “castle” and “palace” are not interchangeable synonyms. A castle is built for the purpose of fortification, whereas a palace is built as a residence
I could continue on with parts three through five, but I feel I've made my point clearly enough.
References to sources would be good for this type of article so that facts can be verified. Overall, some good information here despite some grammatical errors.

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Very intresting article