Your opening paragraph is awkward
My article has been denied due to this: 'Your opening paragraph is awkward'. Please help to change it not to be so awkward.
... How to get to Ancient Rome?
Well, we can watch a movie, make a virtual tour, play a game, read a book, and even listen to appropriate music. Nevertheless, there is one more simple way: just take a tour and visit any of the reconstruction festivals. The latest took place in a former royal estate...
Try addressing the reader directly, using the second person.
Thank you for the reply. I'll do that while rewriting the article.